Fanfic -Incomplete by Langus-

I just finished reading the first chapter of a fanfiction called Incomplete writen by Langus. You can find it on A Single Spark if you want to.

Here are the basics first:

It's canon.

NC-17.

Romance.

Incomplete: 33 chapters so far.

The first chapter is pretty good. It's well writen and it gives you quite a bit of detail, grammar is fine. Now, while it is detailed and, even thought it's onyl the first chapter it appears to have a well-thought out plot that will go somewhere, it is perhaps a little hard to get into. The reason being that for the first little while it almost feels detatched, like you can't get in there and feel connected with the charchters. But not to worry, that problem remedies itself fairly early on in the fic.

This one doesn't take forever to actually get somewhere int he plot, it starts off right in the fray of things so we'll see how it goes. It actually moves quite fast, so if you like at least a little bit of build up before there's interaction between Sesshomaru and Kagome then this fic may not be for you, however, it does start of with action, which, can be quite a turn on for some.

Alright, well that's it for the first chapter, now I'm off to read the rest and see if this fic lives up to it's 9.85 overall score.

Aly