Chapter 2 of Incomplete by Langus

Chapter 2 of Incomplete had a very nice flow to it. Langus is a very descriptive author, which, in this case is a good thing. Chapter 2 moved at about the same pase as the first chapter, all-be-it a little slower. And yet, even though this fic is rather fast paced Langus pulls it off very well, it keeps your attention once it grabs you, and the characters seem very dinamic, they aren't just static charachters that kiss or argue for no apparent reason.